Analysis of His Final Call



World, our kids are starving
Many with no place to sleep
Millions with no families, left orphaned
Cold, hopeless; Alone on the street

Across the world war erupts
Governments fueling the fire
Soldiers wounded and lying dead
Because of the world's selfish desires

Scared cops raised around stereotypes
Allowed to carry a loaded gun
Resulting in many racist related deaths
Killing many, some that were just too young

People are rioting over everything
Whites being blamed for a past far gone
Kids are learning from these examples
World, where have we all gone wrong?

Suicide is rising by the numbers
Getting mental health treatment is a war
Illnesses being left untreated
Because our government has shut that door

The forgotten left unheard
The lost that should have been found
The missing that should be home safe
World, do you hear it yet; the sound?

Sounds of children crying?
Pleas and screams in the night?
Protests for freedom?
The people standing for what is right?

If that's not enough world,
Our kids' purity is now a threat?!
Do you find this okay world?
Is your mind already set?

Is this what you want for your kids' future?
To lose their lives over hate?
Why can't we just stop all this insanity
For the future generations sake?

How we look at birth is out of our control
No human has place to judge
How dare you world, do this to each other
We all carry the same color of blood

Teach your kids the truth now
Don't let the world take their vision
Tell them to love one another
Regardless what they hear on that television

A prayer doesn't hurt
Why judge someone for praying!?
That person's marriage you disapprove of?
It's none of your business; just saying

So you don't like same sex couples?
Your opinion is best unheard
Or you may be a racist; whatever
But teaching your kids to be is absurd!

You should be ashamed of yourselves world
Yeah, you; For thinking this is normal
As humans with a beating heart
You should all feel extremely horrible

Our kids will teach what they learn
They will be our presidents one day
And when life is worse then it is now?
We all have ourselves to blame!

If you love your children
Or have a good heart at all
I'd fix the broken now
Before God makes His final call

Written by
Sherrie Ann Benedict
©2021


Scheme AXXX XBXC XDXX AXEX CFXF GHXH AIXI JKJK BXXX XXBX LDBD XAXA EGBG JMXM XXLX DNLN XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101110 1011111 1011100110 11001101 010111 10010010 10100101 0110110010 11101100 011100101 010010100101 1010110111 1011001010 110110111 111011010 1111111 101101010 1010110101 100101010 01101001111 0010101 0111111 01011111 11111101 111010 101001 1110 010101111 111011 1011001101 111111 1110101 1111111110 1111101 11111110100 10100101 111111111001 1101111 1111111110 1110011011 111011 11011110 11111010 01011111100 01101 111110 110101011 111110110 11111110 10101101 111101010 1101111101 111011011 111101110 11010101 1111010100 10111111 111101011 011111111 11100111 111110 1101111 110101 01111101 101 10110 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,181
Words 407
Sentences 19
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 67
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

This was written after I had seen way to many deaths from abuse in the news, protests across the country, chaos everywhere. I felt saddened and this message popped into my head and it was a message so clear the world needed it hear it

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Written on January 24, 2021

Submitted by sherriebenedict1982 on September 05, 2021

Modified on April 21, 2023

2:04 min read
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Sherrie Ann Benedict

I love writing poetry, songs, books of all kinds, & quotes! I'm very passionate about my writing. Everything I write about is about my life experiences, & things that weigh heavily in my heart about what's happening in our world! I write in hope to inspire millions one day. Maybe even save a life more…

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