Analysis of A revelation



overwhelmed, i kept pushing towards the
99th percentile
maybe there i can find self-satisfaction

controlled by the horrors of sustained underperformance-
a symbol of mediocrity

only when i step out of this hierarchical
system,
do i realize the mortality of it
years of knowledge and obedience leaving me but a moment of satisfaction

realized at a young age that, that which the world idolizes,
 is not something to be pursued

All you need can be found inside yourself.


Scheme XXA XX XXXA XX X
Poetic Form
Metre 011110010 1101 1011111010 01101010100010 01010100 10111111100 10 11100010011 11100010010110101010 10101111101100 11101101 1111110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 462
Words 78
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 4, 2, 1
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

Fixing your eyes on what actually matters rather than on what the majority of people think matter.

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Written on August 27, 2021

Submitted by stephan.johnson on August 27, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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