Analysis of Cancer



The day you passed away
Was the day my whole world got dark and gray.
Why did you have to go and leave?
You said we would live for eternity!
We were so happy together, you and I
A bunch of kids just getting by
They said we wouldn't make it
They said it wouldn't last
20 years together, wow that went fast!
The day they told you the cancer was back,
It was to much, you left to fast
My world crumbled watching you suffer
I felt so helpless, like I was nothing
What I wouldn't give, to have you back
Even for a few minutes, it's all I ask
You were meant for me, as I for you
We had the life of a fairy tale
20 years of joy and love
And cancer stole it all from us


Scheme AABCDDEFFGFHIGJKLMN
Poetic Form
Metre 011101 1011111101 11111101 1111110100 10110010101 01111101 1111011 111101 10101111 0111101011 11111111 111010110 1111011110 111011111 10101101111 101111111 110110101 11101 01011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 645
Words 141
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 505
Words per stanza (avg) 141
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Written on August 23, 2021

Submitted by Dcristiano0513 on August 23, 2021

Modified on March 07, 2023

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