Analysis of Walks I'll Take No More



Sometimes when my heart is restless,
And dreaming of far away;
I visit amongst my daydreams,
With friends of yesterday.

I bring to life the laughter,
Of many years gone by;
And as the haze begins to lift,
I wonder why I cry.

Time sharpens now the memory,
Of summers at the shore;
The starlit nights and pounding surf,
And walks I'll take no more.

The charms of youth have faded,
And wrinkles take their place;
As lines of joy and laughter,
Now traced upon my face.

Onward now I travel,
To meet each brand new day;
Grateful for the friendships,
I've had along the way.


Scheme XAXA BCXC XDXD XEBE XAXA
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 01111110 0101101 1100111 11110 1111010 110111 01010111 110111 11010100 110101 01010101 011111 0111110 010111 1111010 110111 101110 111111 101010 110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 548
Words 106
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

Inspired by thinking back to a time gone by, of sitting on a rock watching the moonrise over the Sound at Mulberry Point, Guilford, CT. Wind in my hair, waves at my feet and the scent of salt air.

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Written on March 26, 1974

Submitted by lynns_g on August 18, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Marilyn Senecal Cavanaugh

Born and raised in North Haven, CT. but moved to the west in 1973. Lived in rural and remote areas most of my life and appreciate Nature and her gifts. Have four children and six grands. Cared for a father and father in law with Alzheimer's and Parkinson's, which consumed 8 years of my life. Worked in an Alzheimer's unit for two and a half years. Life is precious and every moment is to be treasured, even the hard times. It is tragic when all those memories are stolen from us and we can't even recognize the ones we loved. I became a widow at age 45 and had to reinvent myself and my career, to get kids through college. I am a survivor with much to share! Age 72, Young in spirit and a life well lived. more…

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