Analysis of poem #21



Some planets flatten at their rumps,
Some have grown a paunch, and not quite round,
They wander from their orbital bounds.
Ellipses bulge because of lumps.


Scheme ABAA
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11010111 111010111 110111001 110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 154
Words 26
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 4
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 125
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

This in inspired by Hypatia of Alexandria and the ancient astronomers who assumed the planets described circular orbits.

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Submitted by DavidPlantinga on August 16, 2021

Modified by DavidPlantinga on August 16, 2021

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