Analysis of The Three Year Old Runaway



One day when I was barely 3
I felt an urge to explore
The world was so brand new
So I strolled right out the door

My family were all asleep
No one knew I was gone
I was carefree and curious
I could do nothing wrong

Donned with diaper and gown
I proceeded down the street
Toting a box of cereal
For a snack later to eat

I found it most difficult
The box was bigger than me
If I was trying to be discreet
I failed miserably

The neighbors had never seen me
I was too young to play in the front
I was on an uncharted sidewalk
Though it felt more like a hunt

As I was making my journey
I caught a woman’s eye
I knew only a few words
She smiled and said hi

Who are you little one
Someone is missing you
You must be hungry and tired
What happened to your shoes

The woman took my hand
She was quite concerned
Come on sweetie, let’s go inside
And see what we can learn

After a while the police were called
So off to the station I went
I was the talk of the precinct
A life changing event

It was fun at first
The officers’ so kind and caring
They were all quite intrigued
That a baby could be so daring

I felt the pangs of hunger
But the box, I could not open
Finally an officer understood
That's what I was hoping

I dug my hand into the box
I was just about to feast
When all of sudden my mom walked in
Worried, to say the least

Out of nowhere I let out a scream
Putting my mom in a bad light
So loud and unexpected
Giving everyone a fright

I said goodbye to my new friends
As they showered me with kisses
I remember their smiles and waving hands
Saying, be a good little misses

I can still remember the scene
How it unfolded on that day
Ending up with a police record
As a 3 year old run away


Scheme ABCB XXXX XDXD XADA AEXE AFXF GCXX XXXX XHXH XIXI XGXI XJXJ XKXK XLXL XMXM
Poetic Form Quatrain  (73%)
Etheree  (28%)
Metre 1111110 1111101 011111 1111101 11000101 111111 1110100 111101 111001 1010101 10011100 1011011 1111100 0111011 111101101 111000 01011011 111111001 11110101 1111101 11110110 11011 1110011 11011 111101 11101 11110010 110111 010111 11101 11101101 011111 100100101 11101011 1101101 011001 11111 010011010 101110 101011110 1101110 10111110 100110001 111110 11110101 1110111 111101110 101101 11111101 10110011 110010 101001 1111111 11101110 1010110101 101011010 11101001 11010111 101100101 1011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,631
Words 350
Sentences 1
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 60
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

This is a true story about me when I was 3 years old.

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Written on August 17, 2020

Submitted by p_batteate on August 01, 2021

Modified on March 13, 2023

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