Analysis of CYBERSPACE

JP. 1948 (United Kingdom)



Unseen the two of this fandango
Held apart this distanced tango
One sees not the other there
Yet to oblivion they both stare
What could be? Or what cannot
They ponder long upon their lot

Much stronger now the feeling grows
Each taking care that nothing shows
Unguarded smiles are now taboo
Euphoric spasms must subdue
And yet the path they know so well
Will pass by the gates of abject hell

Both entrapped by some former life
Allegiance owed to husband’s wife
But yet to think what might have been
As hormones rise to mix the gene
So far apart they will not meet
Upon the stones of desire street

No comfort wrung from a lovers touch
No minds eye vision held as such
Each lives in the ether of the others thought
On a kindness ready to be bought
To seek the solace of the word
In cyberspace where it can’t be heard


Scheme AABBCC DDEEFF GGXXHH IIXCJJ
Poetic Form
Metre 01011101 10111010 1110101 110100111 1111110 11010111 11010101 11011101 01011101 01010101 01011111 111011101 10111101 01011101 11111111 1111101 11011111 010110101 110110101 11110111 11001010101 101010111 11010101 01011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 807
Words 157
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 164
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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