Analysis of Waiting for you

Yaaya 2001 (Sri Lanka)



If I were a season
If you come like wind
I realized
You were in my life

In a weeping past
Dealing with tears
I had a love of my own
That was not mine

No more questions to ask you
Be happy now
The breath screams and the heart stops
Don't let anyone know

Remember....
Laugh the day I'm gone
Be born hereafter
Be mine only....


Scheme XXXX XXXX XXXX AXAX
Poetic Form
Metre 110010 11111 110 10011 00101 1011 1101111 1111 1110111 1101 0110011 11101 010 10111 11010 1110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 308
Words 67
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Written on July 20, 2021

Submitted by Yaaya on July 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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