Analysis of JESUS WAS MY TEACHER



Jesus was my Teacher
                                   june 6th 2020
                              Original song by Peter Sokolowskyj

chorus
Jesus was my teacher, a great pal of mine.
One special person always had the time.
Served amongst beggars loving all who were poor,
His work never ended, always there was more?
A heart pure as gold that never shut a door,
Cared for all who suffered comforted them galore.

1). Churches today all flourish lusting just for greed,
Forsaking all his duties, deserting the poor in need.
Excessive high rents and prices souring beyond demand,
Forcing the poor into the streets begging for a hand.
Jesus still watches over, now he just weeps and weeps,
Greedy servants all flourish while the evil creeps.

2). Sad to see so many die, who will really care?
See the old and lame pass by while we gaze and stare.
Justifying corruption as usual pretending we all care,
The tale from long, long ago repeating everywhere.
A tale so old the Pharisees too once also understood.
Who too cut him down nailed him to a cross of wood.


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Poetic Form
Metre 101110 111 010011101 10 10111001111 110101101 10110101101 1110101111 01111110101 111110100101 100111010111 01011101000101 010110101000101 1001010110101 1011010111101 101011010101 111110111101 101011111101 1000101100010111 011110101010 011101111001 111111110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,034
Words 178
Sentences 14
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 7, 6, 6
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 196
Words per stanza (avg) 45

About this poem

Chritian country gospel ballad to sing a pharasee tale

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Written on June 06, 2020

Submitted by petersokolowskyj96 on July 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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