Analysis of You are away
You are away,
I cannot sleep.
You have left me,
Awaken and to weep.
Miss you in my arms.
Smiles and kisses by you.
Painfully, I am alive.
No-more loved by you.
May be you seeking,
heaven with others.
I cannot recreate.
heaven with another.
Two souls have to meet,
reaction to their deeds.
To repay and to satisfy,
For balancing as needs.
Being with the other,
Makes you happy.
Living without you,
Left me very unhappy.
| Scheme | XABA XCXC XXXD XEXE DBCB |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Quatrain (80%) Tetractys (45%) Etheree (25%) |
| Metre | 1101 1101 1111 010011 11011 101011 1001101 11111 11110 10110 11010 101010 11111 010111 1010110 110011 101010 1110 10011 1110010 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 418 |
| Words | 77 |
| Sentences | 13 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 20 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 16 |
| Words per line (avg) | 4 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 64 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 15 |
About this poem
The untimely death of my wife on 23rd Oct 2018. Our 9 years of living for each other had left with me unending memories of her at cost of any sound sleep.
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