Analysis of Too Many Suffering Humans



Too many human beings
Are suffering.
Day to night they are
Frantically working.

Always rushing, while living
As if in dead bodies
Too busy living
Life like addicts.

Nowhere to go,
Yet still they are running.
To save themselves
From others’ fury.

Allowing freedom to those
Who are murdering.
Turning a blind eye,
To all those who are suffering.

Humans beings are dying
Every single day.
To be reborn again in time
For the following day.

Just hoping that then
All greed will end,
Even in the most
Inhumane of men.

Looking for a better
Coming together of ways.
They are suffering
In their all days.

Hoping;
It may save their children.
Yet knowing
They will be wrongly proven.

What dreadful life
And luck awaits them?
Unending suffering
Is the future for them.

Too many of them
Are burdened with sufferings.
Who hands out luck
To them as offerings?


Scheme ABXB BXBX XBXX XBXB BCXC DXXD XEBE BFBF XGBG GAXA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (70%)
Tetractys  (48%)
Etheree  (45%)
Metre 1101010 1100 11111 100010 110110 110110 11010 1101 111 111110 1101 11010 0101011 11100 10011 11111100 1010110 100101 11110101 101001 11011 1111 10001 00111 101010 1001011 11100 0111 10 111110 110 1111010 1101 01011 010100 101011 11011 1101100 1111 111100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 807
Words 149
Sentences 18
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

Man-made suffering is earned as reward by the sufferer for the punishment for misdeeds in the previous life. One causes sufferings to another to balance the past account; or to pen for himself the hellish future in the next-life. Writing-off the bad-debts of another and not subjecting another the revenge. Improves Good-Karmas of a humane person. [ Representation of emotions in English from a Hindi song]

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Written on September 11, 1998

Submitted by prithvi_d on July 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

44 sec read
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