Analysis of Subalterns

Elizabeth Daryush 1887 – 1977



She said to one: ‘How glows
My heart at the hot thought
Of battle’s glorious throes!’
He said: ‘For us who fought
Are icy memories
That must for ever freeze
The sunny hours they bought.’

She said to one: ‘How light
Must your freed heart be now,
After the heavy fight!”
He said: ‘Well I don’t know…..
The war gave one a shake,
Somehow, knocked one awake…..
Now. life’s so deadly slow.’


Scheme ABABCCX DXDEFFE
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 111011 1101001 111111 110100 111101 0101011 111111 111111 100101 111111 011101 11101 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 405
Words 78
Sentences 8
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 7, 7
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 142
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 20, 2023

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Elizabeth Daryush

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