Analysis of My Garden



There’s a calm in their surroundings and beauty intoxicating,
I feel this garden mine enchanted with  early morning charm.
Eyes weary of mundane existence beholding,
A mere glance at flowers that apply a soothing balm.
Their gentle  movement suggest an invisible touch,
Of celestial being that taps their visage.  
As if  breathing like us,  they entice me much.
Here then brooding on a beauteous image,
Am I thus in my morning stroll.
Sharing that  glimmer with gayety,
Conversing and commingling with them all.
Though this experience in its entirety,  
Be brief as a moment; extremely small.
And to convey it in Brevity,
Took  but a lengthy scroll.


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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 644
Words 107
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 516
Words per stanza (avg) 113

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My expression of emotion regarding my garden.

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Submitted by mahrukh74 on July 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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