Analysis of How I sleep without you?



You are away,
I cannot sleep.
You have left me,
Awaken and to weep.

Miss you in my arms.
Smiles and kisses by you.
Painfully, I am alive.
No-more loved by you.

May be you seeking,
heaven with others.
I cannot recreate.
heaven with another.

Two souls have to meet,
reaction to their deeds.
To repay and to satisfy,
For balancing as needs.

Being with the other,
Makes you happy.
Living without you,
Left me very unhappy.


Scheme XABA XCXC XXXD XEXE DBCB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Tetractys  (45%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 1101 1101 1111 010011 11011 101011 1001101 11111 11110 10110 11010 101010 11111 010111 1010110 110011 101010 1110 10011 1110010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 418
Words 77
Sentences 13
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

Passing Away of Lover is always is Untimely and at any age, it hurts each moment.

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Submitted by prithvi_d on July 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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