Analysis of The Weak



People of my kind are cowards,
they say,
we are lazy,
they say,
we avoid our problems,
they say.

Yes we are,
and so are many others.
Our wants exceed our capability,
our expectations are without constraints,
but we are not.

I have not found my ambition,
I do not know how to.
I appreciate the beauty of this world,
I appreciate what life has to offer,
but I cannot live only for it.

Some see us as an anomaly,
they are confused,
some are worried,
some are bemused.

Do not help me,
for I want to feel,
do not help me,
for I want to leave.


Scheme xAbAxA xxbxx xxxxx bcxc BxBx
Poetic Form
Metre 10111110 11 1110 11 1011010 11 111 0111010 10101100100 1001010101 1111 11111010 111111 1010010111 1010111110 111011011 111110100 1101 1110 1101 1111 11111 1111 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 514
Words 107
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

A poem written in a melancholic state. The first poem of the the poet. A suggestive poem about how the mentally stable in some parts of the world view those without a will to live and those considering suicide. How the people that are depressed think.(I apologize if you may not find my poem to have been worth the read. I am open to your criticism and am eager to learn more.)

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Written on June 21, 2021

Submitted by on June 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Rajarshi Biswas

A young human in the modern world where he feels shackled. more…

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