Analysis of The Addict

Jessica Moore 1987 (Goppingen)



One more pill, it's all I need
I promise no more after this
Track marks hidden, so others can't see
My addiction has taken me into the abyss
Lying, stealing
From loved ones
Watching, waiting
As my world comes undone
Anger and lashing out
Have become my new norm
Spiraling out of control
My addiction, a raging storm.
Apologies are meaningless
Always blaming others
Leaving in my path broken hearts
Fathers, sisters, brothers, mothers
My addiction rules my world
Destroying everything I had
It eats my body and my soul
How much longer will I last?


Scheme ABCBDEDFGHIHJKLKMNIO
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111111 11011101 111011011 1010110101001 1010 111 1010 111101 100101 101111 1001101 10100101 01001100 11010 10011101 10101010 1010111 0101011 11110011 1110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 527
Words 96
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 439
Words per stanza (avg) 96

About this poem

I recently lost my sister to fentanyl poisoning. I wrote this before she had passed.

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Submitted by Shadowfae on June 16, 2021

Modified on April 30, 2023

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