Analysis of Devoted



Ignore all denial
while intoxicated with lust
soul’s love relinquished
lost amongst nightmares  
Enduring deep pain
such remarkable touch  
Disconnect from one’s feeling
caressed by another’s warmth
Continue holding tightly
delightfully tasting tears
Caviar of the body
in which they indulge on daily  
Happy being together
closely wrapped around each other
Both sacrificing pleasure
still could not be apart  
Dying inside crying out loud
Pure hearts must flow freely  
Infinite everlasting progression
forever perpetually spinning  
Indefinitely alive living
a story but no ending
The two will prevail in life
Devoted lovers that never die


Scheme ABCDEFGHIDIIJJJKLIMGGGNO
Poetic Form
Metre 011010 1010011 11010 1011 01011 101001 0011110 01111 0101010 0100101 101010 01101110 1010010 10101110 110010 111101 10011011 111110 100010010 0100100010 010000110 0101110 0110101 010101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 634
Words 94
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 533
Words per stanza (avg) 94

About this poem

It's about two lovers in their own world. They remain together through life and death.

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Submitted by Nathan55Hitson on June 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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