Analysis of Thoughts



Your heart took the last insult.
Your soul feels so disappointed.
 Your mind cannot retaliate.
 Your spirit has died down.
Life isn't what you wished for.
What do you do to change your life to how you want it to be?
Is it worthless or worth it?
 That's always the question!
Do you retreat or just continue like the hurt isn't there?
I know the hurt and it isn't pretty nor likable .
Matter of fact it's regrettable and hateable!
Always know you can make it through this pain!
Always know you can make it through the depression!
I am you and I am continuing to make it through!
So you can too!


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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 583
Words 112
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 457
Words per stanza (avg) 113

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Sometimes you sit around and think about life .

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Submitted by PoeticER on June 09, 2021

Modified by PoeticER on June 09, 2021

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Poetic ER

Born and raised in Boston, Massachusetts. I started writing poems as an outlet, when I was 11 years old and just continued on. I think I have evolved to spoken word. Soon hoping to have several short books of life. more…

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