Analysis of Paradise



I want to make love
To your soul
Take a sensual journey
Into the unknown

With such love
You’ve ignited
Dreams of ecstasy
Inside of me

I’m feeling inspired
It’s time to make love
Douse the glim
As stars lean together

Our wide bed
Is field of poppies
And you and I
Are the farmers

We seed the field
With the sureness
Of our deep bond
Water it with love

You roam my chest
With gentle fingers
My thigh is a ribbon
Draped over yours

I am ready
You climb me
Nipples hanging
Like bulging alien eyes

Soon our breathing
Slows and deepens
Our eyes close as
We sink into paradise…


Scheme AXBX AXBB XAXX XCXD XCXA XDXX BBEX EXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 111 1010010 01001 111 1010 11100 0111 110010 11111 101 111010 1011 11110 0101 1010 1101 101 11011 10111 1111 11010 111010 1101 1110 111 1010 1101001 11010 1010 10111 110110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 564
Words 111
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 14

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Submitted by Kenpo2021 on June 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ken Carroll

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