Analysis of Wish No Pain



Wish, I could reach your heart!
Wish, I could solve the pain!
The thought of losing you to your inner chaos has never been totally insane.
These thoughts of, if I should, if I could, I only wish you could find the best way out of these inner pains.
Wish you could find the world to be a peaceful plain.
Wish you could take away those rainy days.
As to one day your sunlight will be your inner talents.
Shinning so bright you will forget about all that inner chaos in your brain.
Wish the peaceful words will stop speeding through your brain like a race car doing 100 in the fast lane.
By the way take the peace you deserve as the pain will never change, if you stay where you at in that big brain.


Scheme ABBCBDEBBB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111111 111101 011101111010110110001 1111111111101111011111101 111101110101 1111011101 1111111111010 111110101111010011 1010111101111011100011 10110110110111011111110111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 702
Words 139
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 55
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 545
Words per stanza (avg) 137
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Submitted by PoeticER on June 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Poetic ER

Born and raised in Boston, Massachusetts. I started writing poems as an outlet, when I was 11 years old and just continued on. I think I have evolved to spoken word. Soon hoping to have several short books of life. more…

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