Analysis of Broken inside
Kadot36 2001 (Nairobi)
*BROKEN INSIDE*
Fisting the walls in pain was lame
Ever since I got another break on my lane
All I had in mind was nothing much than pain
Had a heart full of burns cuts and bruises
Seeing my face turn from smiley to frown
Of a great loss collision impacting my soft fragile heart
Couldn't say a word but I wished I could
Felt a sting deep in my chest no known origin
My heart pumping faintly, soul tired of living
Didn't know what else to do other than persevere
Thought that actually I was on the last page of my book
Got hope for two weeks, then shattered
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| Metre | 1001 1010111 101110101111 11101110111 1011111010 1011111011 101101001011101 1010111111 101101111100 111010110110 1011111101001 11100111011111 11111110 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 547 |
| Words | 110 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 2 |
| Stanza Lengths | 8, 5 |
| Lines Amount | 13 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 34 |
| Words per line (avg) | 8 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 221 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 55 |
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