Analysis of Pressure of Life



Pressure of life

Sit down take a breather, you deserve it.
With all the damaging waves coming at you, trying to hold on without taking a break will destroy you.
The wolves in sheep clothing will attach on to you because you're an opportunity, that's great.
Never can you fail in life, if you just take a break.
Come back to the drawing board and never hesitate.
Sit down take a breather, you deserve it.
Let's go back in time and see where you made your mistakes.
Count back one, I should have did this.
Two, I shouldn't of did that!
Three, well let me try again and resuscitate back to these big ole fakes!
The pressure of life is being able to have that poker face and still be great!
Sit down take a breather, you deserve it.
We sit here looking for all the attention to be wanted, desired and respected.
The pressure of life is far from over!
 Just remember it's okay to take a break!


Scheme x AxbcbAdxxdbAxxc
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 1110101011 11010011011101110110011011 0101101011110111010011 1011101111101 111010101010 1110101011 1110101111101 11111111 1110111 11111010010111111 01011110101111010111 1110101011 1111011001011100100010 0101111110 1010111101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 887
Words 171
Sentences 16
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 15
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 345
Words per stanza (avg) 85
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Submitted by PoeticER on May 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Poetic ER

Born and raised in Boston, Massachusetts. I started writing poems as an outlet, when I was 11 years old and just continued on. I think I have evolved to spoken word. Soon hoping to have several short books of life. more…

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