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Giving Up

There are many songs together we would sing,
Upon my hand he placed that beautiful ring,
I feel for him, I really truly deeply do,
But now I dread he feels a better new,
I still want him now be he will never know,
I am oh so good to not let it show,
But how I am suppose to let him know now,
When everything has gone all wrong somehow,
Although it's not all my fault I want to make it right,
I'm not sure I can because it may be way too late,
I don't know what to do and I need a lot of help,
I just wish I could truly tell him how I felt,
He has told me that love is stronger than like,
I know that's true because my love for him is right,
Or is it wrong, I don't eve know anymore, someone help,
I have no more emotions as my organs slowly start to freeze,
Not wanting things to change but it happens anyway,
My heart stops beating and everything turns dark gray,
I try so hard to talk to him, ignoring me as he does,
I tried to get it out of him but me away he shoves,
I give up on all of this, I just can't seem to anymore do it,
I thought I loved him but gave up when he wouldn't let me prove it,
I know he will date more and just leave me behind,
It has happened once before, with a girl, and I was so stupid and blind,
This girl is out to get me, or something a long the lines like that,
She has done this before and now again, I truly hate it,
She has to be better than me since now it's been two,
Two people that have left and cheated on me with her, had it happened to you,
I feel shattered and broken as I try to hide my emotions, and also,
I keep everything in while I start to die alone and slow,
Everything is hid, but I still care for and love him,
But now the glows in my eyes and heart each day grow dim.
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Heather Yarnevic More than 1 year ago
This is a pretty old poem but I still love it, it doesnt really have any LOVE meaning to me anymore because the person it is about I have been over for quite a few years lol but I wrote this in high school so if anyone from my high school read this im sure they know who its about lol but to this day it means nothing but I believe that its still a great poem and did mean something at one time :)
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Aldo Hernandez More than 1 year ago
I understand, i've walked a mile on your shose
Heather Yarnevic More than 1 year ago
:) Feels nice to know im not alone
Ray Clarke More than 1 year ago
You have captured the heartache of failed love well
Heather Yarnevic More than 1 year ago
Thank you so much :)
Sharon Smith More than 1 year ago
Loving someone and being 'in love' with someone are two completely different things.
Heather Yarnevic More than 1 year ago
I agree and I look back now and I know that I wasnt in love I just had love for him :)
Colleen Ruiz More than 1 year ago
sad poem, but i like the way you put it together.
Heather Yarnevic More than 1 year ago
Thanks so much :) I really appreciate it
Steven Gress More than 1 year ago
When love ends the hurt and emotion comes out and its hard to capture in words. I get the poem but there are to many words.
Heather Yarnevic More than 1 year ago
Yeah I have a tendancy to write a lot when Im hurt lol a lot of my poems are pretty long i think I am going to start cutting them down pretty much skip beating around the bush and just get to the point :)
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