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Rise Of The Phonenix

The Phonenix rises from the ashes of the nest
Many Centuries ago it was an egg Myrrh,placed
On the altar of the Sun,Deity!
Rising above the ruins of war ,the crimson ash below
Begins to vanish, the Birds of war retreat A place of
New beginnings,the hope,the love,and integrity of Man
Rekindled the ruins of disputes!
A Kiss of the PHONENIX helps the ruins,and man,himself!
Man is given another chance! Man greets hope with a open heart!
Love of EARTH prevails!

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amber talwar 8 months ago

Its good you thought of speaking about ruins and how man gave another chance and rises above the ruins

Sonja Carnes 8 months ago
The victims of war need a miracle,for survival! The healing of earth is revived,and love embraces
The Earth once again! Another chance!
Sonja Carnes 8 months ago
Man received another chance! Saved!!! Man and the earth rises above the ruins   of war!
Rise Of The Phonenix, by Sonja Carnes 5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 4 reviews.
J Beynon 8 months ago
The title is what I first noticed it really stands out! Love this poem and the words its has an ancient mystique to it and I enjoy that kind of material. I also like the line A kiss of the phoenix helps the ruins, and man, himself. Beautiful line indeed. 5 star work you are truly a super talented poet and writer!
amber talwar 8 months ago

Rises out of ashes and gives. Man another chance

he now greets hope with an open heart after being shattered.

love of earth carries on.

Sonja Carnes 8 months ago
Amber,Thank You for your kind review! I value your comments!
Joshua Waldemayer 8 months ago
I think this poem was really well written if you ask me, it was a good example of what a poem should be.
Sonja Carnes 8 months ago
Thank You,Joshua,how awesome of you,to give such a nice review! I value your comments!
Sonja Carnes 8 months ago
A inspiration for the victims of war!
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