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Open Me  (haiku)

 
Secret of my heart

Dig deep on the water wells

Enter to my soul
 
 
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
I saw some poets doing Haiku. I am amazed because it is too short. I thought it is easy to do it. Yes, it easy in shallow way but it the traditional haiku is 5 syllables then 7 then 5 again. But as a poet, I have to connect them into deeper sense that only the readers imagination will roll in his mind or heart.
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Dotty Mae de Castro More than 1 year ago
Flowing like a river
Jeremiah Villarin More than 1 year ago
Keep up the good work!
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
wonderful review
Alexander Cadavez More than 1 year ago
Very nice
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
wonderful review
Daniel Dimagiba More than 1 year ago
Nice sir!:)
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
wonderful review
Halbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
I agree to Kayle Jenkins. VERY DEEP. You can connect the line by thinking deeply. Excellent
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
wonderful review
Kaylee Jenkins More than 1 year ago
love it. deep and thoughtful.
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
wonderful review
Levi Domingos More than 1 year ago
nice
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
wonderful review
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scary thing
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
wonderful review
Gregory Sun More than 1 year ago
A reminder of how simple love really is. Wonderful!
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
wonderful review
Larry Stallings More than 1 year ago
many possible thoughts for readers
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
wonderful review
Richard Albert More than 1 year ago
It is unfair for some poets who made their poem a bit long. But this simple poems I guess think and imagine it so hard. There is hidden and deeper meaning that only a good poet sense it instinctively. Excellent.
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
MicaUngson More than 1 year ago
Deeeeep
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Philo Francis More than 1 year ago
Deep meaning. Thanks for sharing.
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
wonderful review
Sarah Spohn More than 1 year ago
Interesting haiku imagery
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
michael walker More than 1 year ago
Aloha Bong... well thought out, and delivered... a beauty... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michael.
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Michael Walker. I know the feeling of reviewing Haiku. Intelligent review .Kindly review some of my poems "My dad" , "Love Letter", In One Ultimate Way" ," Secret Place" and "Dried Tears" I will review also your poem after your comment. Thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
wonderful review
Andy Lyle More than 1 year ago
well crafted
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Andy Lyle. I know the feeling of reviewing Haiku. Intelligent review .Kindly review some of my poems "My dad" , "Love Letter", In One Ultimate Way" ," Secret Place" and "Dried Tears" Thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
wonderful review
H S Underwood More than 1 year ago
While you live within the HAIKU rules, these three sentences, while dramatic and vivid in imagery, do not seem to bond together into a cohesive picture. The first and third sentences seemed tied, however, the second seems lost in this poem. You obviously have a talent for painting images, I just wish these three stuck together more for me.
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much
Virgie Morgan More than 1 year ago
I didn't understand the way the three lines related to each other or to the title. Maybe it's just me.
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Virgie. Kindly review some of my poems "My dad" , "Love Letter", In One Ultimate Way" ," Secret Place" and "Dried Tears" Thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
wonderful review
Jean Troup More than 1 year ago
doesn't move me at all.
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much John. Kindly review some of my poems "My dad" , "Love Letter", In One Ultimate Way" ," Secret Place" and "Dried Tears" Thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Jean Troup. Kindly review some of my poems "My dad" , "Love Letter", In One Ultimate Way" ," Secret Place" and "Dried Tears" Thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
wonderful review
John Ginesi More than 1 year ago
This is really hard to review as it is only 4 lines and it does not say very much. I will award you 1 star and encourage you to make longer peoms for the future.
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much John. Kindly review some of my poems "My dad" , "Love Letter", In One Ultimate Way" ," Secret Place" and "Dried Tears" Thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
wonderful review
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