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Soaring Over There

Soaring! the vision of you diving and floating with your mate high above the interstate gave my morning comute an arial ballet and countable moments of joy.  

Connected in flight you two rose and fell like the heavy seas across the window of my ride. Daring, strong and like quicksilver I showed y'all off to my kids on way to office visit. 

A broken body lay untouched for weeks your flightless days started by a driver on this lonely interstate leaving us with a pile of feathers me driving by in tears.  Your mate miss you as it searches without soaring. 
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Nelson Jacobsen More than 1 year ago
I wrote this just after 911.
Poetry.com 4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 4 reviews.
Ornella Dardaine More than 1 year ago
Nice, because it has so much different meanings.
Luis Santiago More than 1 year ago
Really connected with me
Bobby Williams More than 1 year ago
Good stuff man.
Nelson Jacobsen More than 1 year ago
I was trying to work backwards and onwards from this and sadly I still see it on my way to work so I felt a poem might help.
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