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Who Do You See

The me that you dont know,
she is the feelings that i dont show.
Consealed destruction in my mind,
immortality I search to find.
Everyones words eating at my soul,
parts of my sainity locked in a hole.
Secrets and words you can not hear,
they are far beneath the drugs and beer.
I look in the mirror this is what I see,
a terrified soul yearning to be free.
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bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
I LIKED IT
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
I wrote this poem as a teen,(many many years ago) No I was not a drug addict. I was a teenager whom as many could not show my true self for fear of ridicule.
bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
I LIKED IT
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
the day you learn that being yourself is ok is day your free
Chhavi Jalori More than 1 year ago
wht 4 hv u cmnted this on a poem on ragging
bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
COOL
Poetry.com 4.5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 146 reviews.
ed myers More than 1 year ago
well written
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Raja Usman Gul More than 1 year ago
Conveys the heart.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Vishal Raider More than 1 year ago
Its beautiful :-)
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
ty
Jessica Sikora More than 1 year ago
Heartfelt, nicely done
Angel Iesha More than 1 year ago
awesome
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Pencil McRyan More than 1 year ago
You've really put the feeling into words.
Topazjay Thunder More than 1 year ago
This one i understand completely, i "get it". it has a nice flow to it as well
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
ty
Sal Majak More than 1 year ago
sometimes we feel so very suffocated that we just want to break free right? i really loved your poem and can relate to it, it's one of those poems that everyone can reflect on their own lives, nice job.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
tyvm for you kind words
Jessi Reynolds More than 1 year ago
I felt like I was staring in a mirror as I read it. You truly captured a reflection of admittance. Well done!
Jolie Gerding More than 1 year ago
Gets right to the core of the inner feelings that so many of us have felt. Great work!
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Nimita Azeez More than 1 year ago
It's lovely! Can easily relate to what u r trying to say...
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Andrew Schulz More than 1 year ago
this is a well written piece of poetry that defines the two sides of life between what one shows the world and what they themselves know to be true, an inner part of the soul, unseen but wanting freedom
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
ty
Janet Jimenez More than 1 year ago
wow
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Jen Bryan More than 1 year ago
I've been there babe. Keep your head up. Awesome poem.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Pam Adams More than 1 year ago
Love the poem, hate the misery. Very easy to relate with depression battles we all suffer.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
Pam, noone should like misery. this was written over a decade ago can happily say no longer searching for inner peace!
Sameer Shrestha More than 1 year ago
So much pain.. Very good job
Terica L. Stokes More than 1 year ago
loved it
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
ty
Leah Suiter More than 1 year ago
A
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Emilia Wrelton More than 1 year ago
Really well written through foregrounding and marked syntax has really nice ambiguity and imagery yet suggests a clear intention and meaning. I'd really appreciate your feedback if you wouldn't mind!
Candace Wicks More than 1 year ago
Nice job!
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
Glad you enjoyed it!
Sarah Dewey More than 1 year ago
Anyone who hides even a little bit of their insecurities from people in their life can relate to this.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
hope you enjoyed it
Arnulfo Mejia More than 1 year ago
I have wanted to write something this good since i started writing you really take the words out my mind i love it
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
Glad you enjoyed it!
Dakotah Mote More than 1 year ago
want they said, cant find word
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Michael Spinnie More than 1 year ago
that what this poem make me feel
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
Glad you enjoyed it!
abiodun williams More than 1 year ago
Samantha just unveiled the state of man's struggle in the attainment of freedom. i'm loving it
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
ty, glad you enjoyed it
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