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Who Do You See

The me that you dont know,
she is the feelings that i dont show.
Consealed destruction in my mind,
immortality I search to find.
Everyones words eating at my soul,
parts of my sainity locked in a hole.
Secrets and words you can not hear,
they are far beneath the drugs and beer.
I look in the mirror this is what I see,
a terrified soul yearning to be free.
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bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
I LIKED IT
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
I wrote this poem as a teen,(many many years ago) No I was not a drug addict. I was a teenager whom as many could not show my true self for fear of ridicule.
bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
I LIKED IT
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
the day you learn that being yourself is ok is day your free
Chhavi Jalori More than 1 year ago
wht 4 hv u cmnted this on a poem on ragging
bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
COOL
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ticklemuch 20 days ago
And U shall B Free! Keep writing!
Grace VandeWalle 4 months ago
Super good! Lots of description! I love how you used the words to describe exactly how you are feeling. Its realllllyyy good!
Marae Back 5 months ago
i love it!
Emma Shinkins 5 months ago
Amazing poem. It really strikes the message clearly.
Isabella Fincher 6 months ago
This poem perfectly describes how most teenagers feel growing up, including me. The struggle for finding yourself is a long and hard journey, especially when being yourself is different than what your peer group expects you to be. I will definitely remember this poem. Keep writing!
Christopher Hickman 6 months ago
I really get a sense of the fear and inner pain, It makes you want to reach out and give a hug and say, don't worry we're all afraid deep inside.
Rochelle Meyer 6 months ago
Enjoyed it and will remember it
Martin Ndereba 8 months ago
that's a nice piece..i wish i could read more
Emilia Wrelton 9 months ago
Really well written through foregrounding and marked syntax has really nice ambiguity and imagery yet suggests a clear intention and meaning. I'd really appreciate your feedback if you wouldn't mind!
Sandra Barrios 9 months ago
I love the whole thing! Keep up the good work :)
Annette Diforti 9 months ago
Very deep and powerful poem
Hugh Tague 10 months ago
Love your opinion on one I just wrote if you get a chance, Thank You http://poetry.com/poems/1279221-What-To-Say-A-Tribute-to-Maya-Angelou-
Brandi Amon 10 months ago
In my feelings. lol.
Pencil McRyan 11 months ago
You've really put the feeling into words.
Necy Baddass Gem 11 months ago
Loved it. I would appreciate feedback.
D.L J 12 months ago
I too, hope to find myself one day.. Until then, I remain astray.
B H More than 1 year ago
I really loved it, it seems so sincere and heartfelt. Would you mind reviewing my poem, i woud sppreciate your feedback : http://poetry.com/poems/1207511-Hourglass
Kojo Amoako More than 1 year ago
cool.....your review on my poem, will be very much appreciated http://poetry.com/poems/1206086-The-Dreamer thanks
Jessica Sikora More than 1 year ago
Heartfelt, nicely done
Sameer Shrestha More than 1 year ago
So much pain.. Very good job
Light S More than 1 year ago
Cool
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
ty
carl tindle More than 1 year ago
i love this! so meaningful. would you mind reading some of my poems?
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
will do. thanks for the review!
Hoss Orlando More than 1 year ago
In ways it hits me deep
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
Glad it was able to touch you.
Jolie Gerding More than 1 year ago
Gets right to the core of the inner feelings that so many of us have felt. Great work!
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Savannah Holyfield More than 1 year ago
I truthfully admire your work! I would love it if you took the time to look over a poem of mine and shared your thoughts about it! I've just recently began writing on a regular basis. So check out my page!:)
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
Will do Savannah, thanks for your kind words.
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