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Who Do You See

The me that you dont know,
she is the feelings that i dont show.
Consealed destruction in my mind,
immortality I search to find.
Everyones words eating at my soul,
parts of my sainity locked in a hole.
Secrets and words you can not hear,
they are far beneath the drugs and beer.
I look in the mirror this is what I see,
a terrified soul yearning to be free.
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bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
I LIKED IT
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
I wrote this poem as a teen,(many many years ago) No I was not a drug addict. I was a teenager whom as many could not show my true self for fear of ridicule.
bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
I LIKED IT
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
the day you learn that being yourself is ok is day your free
Chhavi Jalori More than 1 year ago
wht 4 hv u cmnted this on a poem on ragging
bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
COOL
Poetry.com 4.5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 145 reviews.
Rujah (Vashti) More than 1 year ago
great !
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Ofuonyebi Nwadinobi Austine More than 1 year ago
There nothing like freedom. Samantha has unlocked one fundamental struggle confronting not only individuals but the whole world.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
i almost like your comment more than I like my poem! lol
Necy Baddass Gem More than 1 year ago
Loved it. I would appreciate feedback.
Dee Montoya Abeyta Valdez More than 1 year ago
For me, this poem conveys the 'frenzy' and disorganized thinking in a mind clouded by mind-altering drugs. Thanks for the insight.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
It was the contrary, the belief that drugs and alcohol could free the trapped soul by lowering the gates of inhibitions then having the realization that the soul was trapped much deeper than that. Although, Im always for people making their own interpretations!
Abigail Brownstone More than 1 year ago
Epic poem!!
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
big thanks
Kurt Barilla More than 1 year ago
your with the friends that need
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
oh yes, but it is reciprocated
Topazjay Thunder More than 1 year ago
This one i understand completely, i "get it". it has a nice flow to it as well
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
ty
Sal Majak More than 1 year ago
sometimes we feel so very suffocated that we just want to break free right? i really loved your poem and can relate to it, it's one of those poems that everyone can reflect on their own lives, nice job.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
tyvm for you kind words
Brittany Crawford More than 1 year ago
I feel this so much
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
Glad you enjoyed it!
Briana Kimberlyy More than 1 year ago
I felt this.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
glad you enjoyed it
Isabella Fincher More than 1 year ago
This poem perfectly describes how most teenagers feel growing up, including me. The struggle for finding yourself is a long and hard journey, especially when being yourself is different than what your peer group expects you to be. I will definitely remember this poem. Keep writing!
Dahvia Istler More than 1 year ago
used to feel the same! love your choice of words! nobody knows the things u dont tell them.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
glad you felt it
Sienna Juliet More than 1 year ago
I feel pulled in to the depths of a more complex mentallity than what you seem to have to those that surround you, well done!
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
I wouldnt presume that I have any more insight than another, everyone hides some piece of themselves at one time or another
Christopher Rodriguez More than 1 year ago
I loved it. I can see my life in those words. I can relate to that life. I love how it speaks to the reader and draws them in. You should check my poem "A Warning" out and let me know what you think?
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
Glad you enjoyed it! Big thanks
Marae Back More than 1 year ago
i love it!
Arnulfo Mejia More than 1 year ago
I have wanted to write something this good since i started writing you really take the words out my mind i love it
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
Glad you enjoyed it!
Amber Bollinger More than 1 year ago
Very Relatable.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
I LIKE IT
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Malik Amjad Haider More than 1 year ago
soul
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
ticklemuch More than 1 year ago
And U shall B Free! Keep writing!
B H More than 1 year ago
I really loved it, it seems so sincere and heartfelt. Would you mind reviewing my poem, i woud sppreciate your feedback : http://poetry.com/poems/1207511-Hourglass
Wallace LaBenne More than 1 year ago
Disclosure.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
ty it was one of my fav lines when written
Angel Iesha More than 1 year ago
awesome
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Sean Grund More than 1 year ago
I have experience with problems like the character and I feel a connection. Most of my writing is built off of this principle and it is one of the reasons that I write. Great job!!
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks.
Janet Jimenez More than 1 year ago
wow
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
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