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Hear the words of wisdom,
Experience comes the words spoken to you,
For you can build a whole new Kingdom,
Elders are not here to make your life blue,
\We see the same mistakes being made,
A vicious circle never broken,
Praying errors of your ways will fade,
Listen--to the knowledge being spoken,
\Time seems to tick away,
Trying to save just one heartache of life,
Hurt after hurts comes every day,
Soon you either become or take on a wife,
\Dreams of youth are now lost,
Adulthood is upon the child,
Listen--before you pay the high cost,
For the world is not calm and mild.

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Deana LaShan Cannon More than 1 year ago
And so goes the circle of life. Great job. Keep on expressing yourself.
Gen Koval More than 1 year ago
Love it...well written..i couldnt agree with you more..nice job
Nick Hartkey More than 1 year ago
well said
Ricky Sholar More than 1 year ago
Nicely done
Justina Dickson More than 1 year ago
Often words used to guide aren't taken that way and the mistakes are still made.
Gino Valentine More than 1 year ago
well done
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