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Knocking at my door

Somebody knocking

at my door

I wonder who it is

is it  one,two , or more

peoples at the door

waiting for me 

could it be a stranger

or someone I don't

want  to see 

Somebody knocking

at the door for me

lord, I  hope it's

not a bill collector

cause they won't

get no money from me

Somebody knocking 

at my door

I don't know

If their friendly or

just bothering me

If It ain't important

I do not want to see

who is knocking

at the door

for me

Somebody knocking

at my door

The End!                                                     
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Poetry.com 4 out of 5 based on 6 votes.
Keisha Williams Cranford More than 1 year ago
I like it because people do think about things like this before they answer their door and the bill collector is a joke cause I never had a bill collector at my door lol but, unlike the last person who comment on my poem I think I did a beautiful job we all have our own ways of writing so it doesn't matter if you like it or not but thanks for being honest with me
Dusty Duty More than 1 year ago
A long print of intellectual defense and imaginary. Good write.
Keisha Williams Cranford More than 1 year ago
Thank You very much
J C'Qua More than 1 year ago
I enjoyed it, it was witty and had some emotional suspense, nice easy read. Simple enough to let the reader use their imagination, but guiding as well..Seems most of what I read on here (this website)is a precursor to a suicide note..too much agony for me..so this is a welcome change
Barry Noel Williams More than 1 year ago
Can relate to the worry about bill collector.
Keisha Williams Cranford More than 1 year ago
Thank You
Joshua David Ryder 8 months ago
not very impressed the layout of words is big for me you put to many spaces in in the poem
Jacob Miller More than 1 year ago
too much emphasis on rhyme, never let the words work
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