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I Remember

I remember the days your mama had to to go thru before you arrived
The pain was beyond anything I can ever imagine
I remember the oath I swore that I'd ensure you'd never break your mamas heart
Coz I felt her pain..
I remember the moment you arrived,
I remember the joy I felt
I remember the joy on your mama's face to hold you for the first time .
I remember being reluctant to cut the cord...
I remember you crying alot..
I remember dancing with you in my arms to the beat of Salima
I remember humming hyms to make you sleep
I remember you not going to sleep unless it was me near you swaying you to sleep
I remember your mama saying you are dady's girl
You remember me going away
You remember me not being there
You remember crying for the icecream with no one to buy it for you
You remember seeing other kids with thier daddies and you looking silly because I was not there
You remember seeing me only once a month or so
You remember calling me and the phone ringing out...
I remember now, you can remember....
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Poetry.com 4.3 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 7 reviews.
Gary Hill More than 1 year ago
Sad and heartfelt write from the perspective of the absent father
Brendon Bure More than 1 year ago
Thankyou. I feel that way and Iam glad you can see the way i feel with the way it has been written...
Brundaban Panda More than 1 year ago
Brendon Bure More than 1 year ago
Thankyou , I just thought i write something to "snap the momment" . Iam in the office, working late and I thought of my daughter whom i have not seen for while. She is beautiful.
Jonah Polo More than 1 year ago
Eric McGeer More than 1 year ago
Somewhat long sentences sometimes, but a lovely poem
Larry Stallings More than 1 year ago
Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi More than 1 year ago
good poem but too many repetitions All the same a good effort keep writing and sharing more
Charlotte Stevenson More than 1 year ago
So much nostalgia is put across to the reader - a big impact!
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