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Ice Guitar

The icy Rhythm of the guitar
Frozen notes on high
The power of the song
Is breath taking
It takes the tears away
In times life
Should the powerful notes
Be to great
They will shatter
The guitar
Yet!, The magical spell of love
Keeps the powerful magic's
Rhythm from shattering
The guitar into a million lost notes
Of sorrow gripping beat
So play on, Oh beauty, play on
And breathe your love
Thru the icy cycled guitar
Of times sorrow
For love is what is needed
Frozen sorrow's in icy magic
The true life of the icy guitar
A guitar of sorrow in loves icy magic 
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Poetry.com 4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 5 reviews.
Apostle Danyeal Holloway More than 1 year ago
Cynthia Macy More than 1 year ago
well done!
Laura Breidenthal More than 1 year ago
The title caught my interest and I really enjoyed reading what was within. Good job!
Drew Clausen More than 1 year ago
thank you Laura.. Now re-read it and think Jimmy Hendricks if you know who he is.. If not then think Rolling stones early era style of songs and the group KISS.. then let me know what you think of the poem again.
Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi More than 1 year ago
good poem
William Crago More than 1 year ago
too many uses of the same words and images. like the idea, as a guitar player myself, just needs more creativity and variety
Drew Clausen More than 1 year ago
true but the flow of the poem worked this way the best as I seen it.. I know this is more of a basic type poem for me..
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