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Sea Breeze


Send my message through winds
 
Let him know that I love him
 
Let the message caress his skin
 
For he is my island sunset
 
 
 
And I am his summer’s breeze
 
Tell him I love him so
 
Let him know I miss is love
 
But there will be a time that we’ll
 
 
 
Each other soon,
 
Enwrapped in loving arts
 
WE can count the days
 
Till we see each other
 
 
 
But now I send my love in the sea breeze
 
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Poetry.com 4.5 out of 5 based on 4 votes.
Allyson Lamoreaux More than 1 year ago
reminds me of the song sea breeze that I used to listen to in Hawaii
Brundaban Panda More than 1 year ago
Very natural and loving poem.
Jessy More than 1 year ago
Suggestions: Let him know I miss is love: Let him know I miss his love Send my message through winds: Send my message through the winds Let him know that I love him: Let him know that I love him truly Let the message caress his skin truly/For he is my island sunset: (I feel like there is something missing in between these two lines.) But there will be a time that we'll Each other soon,: But there will be a time when we'll soon be in each other's arms.
Robert Bendoris More than 1 year ago
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