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I will take them

It won't be good
If I remain quite
Write nothing
And wish something
 
So I love poetry
Take it as prayer to almighty
For all my sins and lapses
To spare me from all type of curses
 
Let me not suffer
Despite earnest offer
That I may change
With course and manage
 
 I shall sing even
With my fellow brethren
About motherland and peace
Their plight and how the life can be at ease?
 
I might commit an error
Not much to the delight of honor
But I shall take care
Not to offend any one who is near
 
I shall shed tears
For those who always fear
About their life and feel deprived
I shall take them to right course if they really believed 
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Faheem Jawaid More than 1 year ago
Noble and sincere thoughts well put across. Great read.
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