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Alone in a crowd

I cry inside and I laugh through my heart,
As within the crowd I am far apart,
Clouds come to shadow me as I am,
Take me to the place, an audience for my fan,
Give me your sadness let me carry your load,
As into oblivion, this hot and desolate road,
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Poetry.com 4.6 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 5 reviews.
Michelle Bay More than 1 year ago
very nice little poem. good wording structure and rhyme. well done.
John S Johnson More than 1 year ago
I dont ahve no sadnes but you are welcome to take my load
Eddie Tkz More than 1 year ago
love the hidden story being portrayed and how the rhyme fits in
Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi More than 1 year ago
beautiful rhythm
Ian Tronco More than 1 year ago
Sad poem
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