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She is beautiful

Elegant , fashioned together by God, with silk and fine tapestry
She is a radiant light.  Highly esteemed.
I see her clearly down the corridor, she probably
Doesn’t see me , but I’m looking when she isn’t
Down the tiniest corner of my eye, another glimpse is all I need,
A brief flash of her light, for I know I wouldn’t be fully composed with more
, more might break me as a man, truly showing how much I care.
A delicate flower now fully in site, oh what a thrill, such delight
It Is to just behold and to see, I politely sing, maybe she’ll find grace in my song
, possibly the nobility of my melody could make her ask for more.
They say “love is patient and love is kind”, patiently I wait and with kindness I sing.
Oh the bliss that is inside of me
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Poetry.com 3.6 out of 5 based on 5 votes.
Nick Adegwe-Oshomah More than 1 year ago
Well penned.. Nice
Tiago Monteiro More than 1 year ago
thank you
Brock Green More than 1 year ago
Heartfelt and it hits home for me specifically. A truly great poem
Tiago Monteiro More than 1 year ago
thanks!
Joshua Reed More than 1 year ago
I like it :)
Chrissy Lagala More than 1 year ago
nice
Tiago Monteiro More than 1 year ago
Thank you
jeffrey tokarz More than 1 year ago
needs a little structure
Tiago Monteiro More than 1 year ago
Thanks for your honesty, yes it is kind of sappy i just kind of spilled my feelings into words. How do i restructure this?
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