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Where did we go wrong?

Th breeze stiring
the motion so deep inside
small voices, reaching
but still trying to hide
broken and faded
into misery
is this truely what loves
supposed to be?
questions no answers
it just goes on and on
makes me wonder
where in the world
did we go wrong?
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Poetry.com 3.6 out of 5 based on 5 votes.
Christopher Duntsch More than 1 year ago
LOVE STARTS LIKE A FORCE THAT IS DIFFICULT CONTROL. MORE THAN AN EMOTION. THEN DEGRADES INTO A BLAH THAT MOST HUMANS CAN'T HELP HAPPEN. THEN ITS DOWNHILL. THE TRUTH IS, OUR HUMANITY IS THE REASON FOR THE LOSS OF ONCE PERFECT LOVE, BUT ALSO THE VERY THING THAT COULD WITH SOME INSIGHT AND PATIENCE KEEP IT PERFECT. YET KNOW ONE DOES THIS OFTEN. WHY?
Morgan Wilke More than 1 year ago
a well made point. :)
Ravindra Kumar More than 1 year ago
Questionable.
Elias Foukis More than 1 year ago
Good poem
Anjam Abbas More than 1 year ago
nice
Lilly Emery More than 1 year ago
GOOD
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