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I will wait for you.

I will wait for you as the ruins wait for travelers.
I will wait for you like sea wait for rivers
 
I will wait for you to run your fingers
along the contours of my body just
as we ran them along the walls and columns,
to touch the bases and  to ignite the love.
 
I will wait, even though it is hard to be left behind,
I want to relive this feeling that you are with me
even though you are not by my side
waiting isn’t about patience or  hope,
it is about keeping the dreams alive .
 
And  these dreams are my only property,
 something to live for and  the only thing to die with.
 
Dated 12 -12-2012
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Great poem Asim
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much Gabi
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
SUPERB. ONE OF YOUR BEST POEM ASIM. I try to review 5 time and I really don't know why my review don't come true
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thank u so much. It happens manytimes, I am so happy you liked it and left beautiful comments and they are more than anything else....THANKS GABI....
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Katherine Gibbs More than 1 year ago
wow this is amazing you have an amazing gift.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
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Mohammed Saad More than 1 year ago
Ending is so beautifuuly written I am amazed....Good thoughtful poem....Sir.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
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Ashok Babu More than 1 year ago
loved your poetry my friend pls visit http://www.poetry.com/poems/579092-This-Poet-
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
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Migdalia Burgoin More than 1 year ago
longing to be with that one love-is like a warm kind of sadness.
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tj hatton More than 1 year ago
Is the moment when a dreams desire is looking forward to reality.
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mia b More than 1 year ago
This feels very spiritual, big picture wisdom. It really is beautiful.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx muxh
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Donka Krsteva More than 1 year ago
waiting... keeping the dreams alive; ...indeed i agree; a very moving, touching the heart poem
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
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Khalil Goddard More than 1 year ago
This is truly lovely Asim.
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Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
Wonderful poem Asim . One of my favorite poem of you .
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx Much Ms Doina
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Norman Wilson More than 1 year ago
Loves tale of a wanting heart. Well written poet.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
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tony right More than 1 year ago
something to live for and the only thing to die with...wonderful well written and there's a measure to a man that can wait..excellent
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
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Randy Nii More than 1 year ago
a very serene feeling of patient desire
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
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Alex Mahayo More than 1 year ago
One of your best poem. Love it so much.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
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Ashwani Roy More than 1 year ago
I shall wait for you... To read your next poem! The poem is compatible with your name....literally 'ASIM'
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
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Jacob Tyler More than 1 year ago
lOVE IT
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naomi buote More than 1 year ago
flows well...nice choice of words. Pictures well the feeling of missing someone
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
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noopur gulati More than 1 year ago
its beautiful, And these dreams are my only property, something to live for and the only thing to die with. these lines are awesome and so much filled with true feelings when u love someone from the bottom of your heart..........
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
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Peter J Brown More than 1 year ago
A very nice poem Asim. Waiting for The One. Well written. Try this if you like: http://poetry.com/poems/577558-Being-You
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
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Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Wonderful poem.
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Paolii Gujago More than 1 year ago
I heard people saying realities their property but I never heard someone saying dream, fiction and imagination their property...Original thoughts...Asim Nehal
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Zubair Hussain More than 1 year ago
Mesmerized, Speechlessssssssssssssssssssss Love your statements.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
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Duelo Sayango More than 1 year ago
It has musical touch in it...From the heart...... Love it Asim
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The Pinocchiø Poet More than 1 year ago
Very deep, very heavy, and very nicely penned! I can totally relate to this poem. She is gone, and even though I was hurt, i hold out hope over hope! Fantastic poem with great imagery, powerful words!
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks Much Richard.....
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sara irizarry More than 1 year ago
patient love pretty
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Suzzies Suzanne More than 1 year ago
Another super poem on love, hope and serenity.
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Jammie Mae More than 1 year ago
Sweetest poem for today
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