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Lilith Rising

She is livid mad
Crazy bad
Kick your *ss kind of badass Wo-
But ain’t no Man a fan
Of this kind of Black-Red
Sick-nisssss (I mean that in the Present Tense –
Sick as awesome not sick as bad)
Just ask the First Man
How he couldn’t stand the Original
Kick-*ss lass:
The one we know as
How he moaned and bitched like a little b*tch:
“Ooo, waaa….God made a mistake --
Cause this woman won’t Subjugate”
Subservi-ate made Her irate
‘Less Than’ was nothing she would tolerate
So God banished Her to the Other Land
But She was the Wrong One to ban!
Shoulda took that Adam-Man off his
Ladder, man --
Made him mate with matter, man
But he shoved Lilith in the Shadow-Land
And by His command…
Another woman up God’s sleeve!
Mix, carve, blow…
Why, look...
It’s Eve.
Oh, so willing,
Oh, so sweet
So ready to just
Lie Beneath
And take what Adam did bequeath
She’d lay there silent,
Just receiving
The entire time just believing
She must be doing the Right Thing --
By never, ever
Adam praised God’s “Good Girl” work
Secretly feeling like the biggest jerk
For all the while he was screwing Eve –
It was Lilith he was seeking.
 [And all the men wonder today
Why a woman won’t just speak up and say
All the things that she is feeling
But deep inside an Ancient Fear
That we’ll be Sent Away for speaking
There’s that Usher song, you know the one that says:
“Want a lady in the street but a freak in the bed…”
But the Freak is the one who won’t Lie Beneath…
The one We All left for dead.
She wonders now, as she break out
And leaves her Shadow Land:
Who is strong enough to Share my bed…
Is there Such a Man?]
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Poetry.com 4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 4 reviews.
George Collett More than 1 year ago
Penned as only a Pagan soul can understand! I am such a soul! Lilith is my Patron Goddess my friend and I loved this read much better than many others I have seen here! Excellent stuff and epic story! I salute you!
George Collett More than 1 year ago
If you have time please rate http://www.poetry.com/poems/561991-Dr-Seuss-s-Restaurant
katie heeran More than 1 year ago
Thank You George!
Suzi Berry More than 1 year ago
Lilith the Moon is Eve the light side of the Moon is still mysuelf writing fancy poetry nfrom a-star a stairwell realm of shadows...all about eve(Lilith)
Jerry Tyler More than 1 year ago
good job
Motaz Khalil More than 1 year ago
well done, but i thought at the start that it was a rap song, but you ended up nicely.
katie heeran More than 1 year ago
Thanks for the review! Yeah, you were right-on...it had a little rap thing going on there at the start.
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