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Yet Again - Series of Haiku

Your memory comes
and floats on moonlit water
to swim yet again.
 
Bubbles of bygone
Quivers memory storage
To prompt yet again
 
The lost rainbow love ,
recur with exuberance
marching yet again.

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Poetry.com 4.7 out of 5 based on 39 votes.
maria shaw More than 1 year ago
Very well done Asim.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
T H Siddiq More than 1 year ago
Great flow and superb message. I liked it.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much TH S
Sophy Chen More than 1 year ago
nice to read
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
Deepak Sahu More than 1 year ago
Nothing much to say except cherish these haikus.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
Omyar Kahn More than 1 year ago
They all gel perfectly.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
Dema Al-Obaidy More than 1 year ago
So beautiful.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
Shahid M More than 1 year ago
Great thinking..Asim
Shahid M More than 1 year ago
Magestic I mean
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
The Pinocchiø Poet More than 1 year ago
These little series of Haiku's are very cool! Very nicely penned, love the lost rainbow love, too cool!
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks Richard...I 'm glad u liked it.
Suzzies Suzanne More than 1 year ago
Emotions flowing in all haikus
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
Ashok Babu More than 1 year ago
you have mastered this pls check http://www.poetry.com/poems/478070-LIFE-
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks
A Soul ( poetess) More than 1 year ago
came to say everyone HI.. miss you all.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks Asma, Where r u ? I don't see u often....Even I am busy these days...Take care ....
Mike Jacks More than 1 year ago
Mindblowing haiku series..Keep it up.
Thomas Hanlon More than 1 year ago
can somebody tell me how one poem gets so many reviews
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Open secret , Write with your heart and if your poem has X-factor u will get reviews else will see the dusk of the day soon.
Sahebrao Deshmukh More than 1 year ago
Wonderful Haiku series. I love all of them.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
Donka Krsteva More than 1 year ago
I love the sense of movement.... always forward and higher... like the flight of the eagles
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much Donka
Cory Dewar More than 1 year ago
great choice of words
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx Much Cory
Timothy Shepard More than 1 year ago
I can really relate with this poem
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much Timothy
Jasmine Sharma More than 1 year ago
Wow, this is awesome series, one of your best I have seen so far, Love it ♥
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
Siddharth Singh More than 1 year ago
Good articulation, the way it comes and occur
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much Sid
Tashwer Mue More than 1 year ago
Always enjoy the haiku u write
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
tony right More than 1 year ago
well written and expressed...keep it up
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
Melissa Corneliius More than 1 year ago
My favorite "Haiku!"
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
Zack Powell More than 1 year ago
Very nice haiku cluster, Asim! I must admit that I'm jealous of your innate talent for imagery, especially in such short lines. 'Lost rainbow love' is just beautiful. Keep at it, friend!
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much Zack, I'm glad u liked it.
Simon Elliott More than 1 year ago
the imagery of past.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
i loved each one , great stuff
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
Tejinder Singh More than 1 year ago
well written
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much
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