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Losing You (Haiku)

My soul died today
Deceased and buried by grief
Your memory haunts
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Poetry.com 4.6 out of 5 based on 17 votes.
Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi More than 1 year ago
great work well done..
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Wonderful Haiku
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Thanks much, Asim.
ann johnson-murphree More than 1 year ago
Keep creating. ajm
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Thanks, Ann. I appreciate it!
Farida Amin More than 1 year ago
Wonderful haiku
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Thanks much, Farida!
Geslany As Ging Alburo Duncan More than 1 year ago
Good job
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Thanks much, Geslany.
Animus Vox More than 1 year ago
Emotions are so well presented. Nice work, Jyrone.
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Thanks Animus. I appreciate your kind words.
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
Well written
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Thanks much, Doina.
Catherine Menichelli More than 1 year ago
Sad, but very good.
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Thanks, Catherine, I appreciate it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
well done
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Thanks much, Gabriel.
tj hatton More than 1 year ago
Something dies inside grief follows but the memory lingers on, very well put. Nice one Jyrone, TJ.
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Thanks, TJ, I appreciate it!
Nick Tamborra More than 1 year ago
sad and touching haiku jyrone, I had to read it a few times for it was quite beautiful, Really nicely done pls leave a review if you can http://www.poetry.com/poets/185762-Nick%20Tamborra/482844-WHAT-GOES-ROUND
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Thanks, Nick; your kind words are greatly appreciated!
Ingrid Luvgud More than 1 year ago
very good
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Thanks much, Ingrid.
James Johnson More than 1 year ago
ok
Ashok Babu More than 1 year ago
crisply worded... pls review http://www.poetry.com/poems/479933-The-Lonely-Road-#
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Thanks much, Ashok.
Fred Lassonde More than 1 year ago
:(
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Thanks, Fred.
John Lowe More than 1 year ago
A very good haiku
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Thanks much, John.
Prasant Kumar Routray More than 1 year ago
A soul can not die.An excellent t Haiku
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Thanks, Prasant.
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