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Love is Fragile

love is fragile
like a vine
it can break at anytime

if you look
you will see
that no matter what
we can change our indespicable ways

and we can be
the best we can be

if we truely trust and believe
we can make it
to what its suppose to be

skys the limit and your my shining star
lets take this to our opening arms
every word
every moment will last even more


our love is more then anyone can describe
lets show them the meaning of our desirable feeling

     
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Poetry.com 4.6 out of 5 based on 7 votes.
Nick Adegwe-Oshomah More than 1 year ago
A good one
Laura Makar More than 1 year ago
thanks
Ging Alburo More than 1 year ago
good job
Laura Makar More than 1 year ago
thanks
Colleen Jones More than 1 year ago
great job. i love the vine metaphor. please review my work if you have time.
Laura Makar More than 1 year ago
thank you and i will later on today
Richard League More than 1 year ago
Ive picked you to help ok dispicable ways broke the vine? Then you can mend the vine ? dont see it we can change our indespicable ways we are free???Maybe If you can change your dispicable ways .. What does that have to do with being fragile anything eeee or or just something to do with anything alreadt in there.
Subrata Ray More than 1 year ago
Excellent
Laura Makar More than 1 year ago
thank you
Tymofiy Hawrysh More than 1 year ago
Spell "suppose" as "supposed"; "your" as "you're". The poet challenges every lover to be alive in their love with each other, to rise above their current state. Standing firm in the belief makes love rise above the ordinary in each other's arms and lives. The variety of length of the lines and intermittent rhyme demonstrates that love is not bound to set form and function. A good call to be above standard human existence.
Laura Makar More than 1 year ago
thank you
Stevie Ray More than 1 year ago
You have good ideas here! Now make it flow more :)
Laura Makar More than 1 year ago
i added more. tell me what you think and thanks =]
Richard League More than 1 year ago
Exactly
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