TRUTH - GIVES LIFE TO HEART
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Life is a journey...as if a wave....
....that runs across the Ocean.
If I am a Fish,that was hit by some huge waves...
...let me learn to live life.
Many waves left me aside discouraging my Spiritual strength...
Some waves helped me to swim well...
.......where I developed my heart with good health.
Time has given me friends good and bad..
though I did not expect a thing from both...
Just said to them to remember me hence forth...
.....in their life only as a gentle folk.
Think of me as one among their friends...
I am here not to please others but myself.
Yes!Truth really hurts but lies do kill one for life time.
Never, betray anyone who trust you in their life.
Your lies may help you to keep good friends.....
but your truth will reveal...who will stay as your true friends.
....that runs across the Ocean.
If I am a Fish,that was hit by some huge waves...
...let me learn to live life.
Many waves left me aside discouraging my Spiritual strength...
Some waves helped me to swim well...
.......where I developed my heart with good health.
Time has given me friends good and bad..
though I did not expect a thing from both...
Just said to them to remember me hence forth...
.....in their life only as a gentle folk.
Think of me as one among their friends...
I am here not to please others but myself.
Yes!Truth really hurts but lies do kill one for life time.
Never, betray anyone who trust you in their life.
Your lies may help you to keep good friends.....
but your truth will reveal...who will stay as your true friends.
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Poetry.com 4.1 out of 5 based on 10 votes.
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i like the use of waves bringing down your spirituality & bringing you in as well push pull effect common in life
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I liked it, I agree to what Doina said...
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true friend come to be very rare today and if you have it , be happy. very nice poem
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Your lies may help you to keep good friends.....
but your truth will reveal...who will stay as your true friends.
Nice conclusive lines that adore the sweet lines of thepoem!
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"Never, betray anyone who trust you in their life.
Your lies may help you to keep good friends".
i noted these two lines.
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I like this poem a lot it reaches out to me.
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i like this
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I was really into being a fish but that theme kind of piddled off….:-(
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Could use some touching up, but the framework is there for a great poem.
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