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Who Do You See

The me that you dont know,
she is the feelings that i dont show.
Consealed destruction in my mind,
immortality I search to find.
Everyones words eating at my soul,
parts of my sainity locked in a hole.
Secrets and words you can not hear,
they are far beneath the drugs and beer.
I look in the mirror this is what I see,
a terrified soul yearning to be free.
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bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
I LIKED IT
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
I wrote this poem as a teen,(many many years ago) No I was not a drug addict. I was a teenager whom as many could not show my true self for fear of ridicule.
bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
I LIKED IT
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
the day you learn that being yourself is ok is day your free
Chhavi Jalori More than 1 year ago
wht 4 hv u cmnted this on a poem on ragging
bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
COOL
Poetry.com 4.5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 147 reviews.
Lorie Chartier More than 1 year ago
I felt what you wrote, I love poems that make me feel. Yours did beautifully.
Christopher Hickman More than 1 year ago
I really get a sense of the fear and inner pain, It makes you want to reach out and give a hug and say, don't worry we're all afraid deep inside.
Leah Suiter More than 1 year ago
A
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Sarah Dewey More than 1 year ago
Anyone who hides even a little bit of their insecurities from people in their life can relate to this.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
hope you enjoyed it
Candace Wicks More than 1 year ago
Nice job!
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
Glad you enjoyed it!
Jolie Gerding More than 1 year ago
Gets right to the core of the inner feelings that so many of us have felt. Great work!
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Jessi Reynolds More than 1 year ago
I felt like I was staring in a mirror as I read it. You truly captured a reflection of admittance. Well done!
Andrew Schulz More than 1 year ago
this is a well written piece of poetry that defines the two sides of life between what one shows the world and what they themselves know to be true, an inner part of the soul, unseen but wanting freedom
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
ty
Terica L. Stokes More than 1 year ago
loved it
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
ty
Pencil McRyan More than 1 year ago
You've really put the feeling into words.
Nimita Azeez More than 1 year ago
It's lovely! Can easily relate to what u r trying to say...
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Afton Laidy Zabala-Jordan More than 1 year ago
This was an amazing read. It really was heartfelt and spoke to me. Sometimes we really hide ourselves inside of us so that noone sees who we really are or so we can protect ourselves.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
David Winpenny More than 1 year ago
very good descriptive and clever!
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Felica Jones More than 1 year ago
this is such an amazing poem so deep. i can hear your cry in this poem
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
Glad you enjoyed it!
Topazjay Thunder More than 1 year ago
This one i understand completely, i "get it". it has a nice flow to it as well
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
ty
Sal Majak More than 1 year ago
sometimes we feel so very suffocated that we just want to break free right? i really loved your poem and can relate to it, it's one of those poems that everyone can reflect on their own lives, nice job.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
tyvm for you kind words
Malik Amjad Haider More than 1 year ago
soul
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Wallace LaBenne More than 1 year ago
Disclosure.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
ty it was one of my fav lines when written
Martin Ndereba More than 1 year ago
that's a nice piece..i wish i could read more
Michael Spinnie More than 1 year ago
that what this poem make me feel
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
Glad you enjoyed it!
Janet Jimenez More than 1 year ago
wow
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Angel Iesha More than 1 year ago
awesome
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Vishal Raider More than 1 year ago
Its beautiful :-)
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
ty
Jen Bryan More than 1 year ago
I've been there babe. Keep your head up. Awesome poem.
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Shannon McMahon More than 1 year ago
yes
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
ty
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