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Who Do You See

The me that you dont know,
she is the feelings that i dont show.
Consealed destruction in my mind,
immortality I search to find.
Everyones words eating at my soul,
parts of my sainity locked in a hole.
Secrets and words you can not hear,
they are far beneath the drugs and beer.
I look in the mirror this is what I see,
a terrified soul yearning to be free.
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bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
I LIKED IT
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
I wrote this poem as a teen,(many many years ago) No I was not a drug addict. I was a teenager whom as many could not show my true self for fear of ridicule.
bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
I LIKED IT
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
the day you learn that being yourself is ok is day your free
Chhavi Jalori More than 1 year ago
wht 4 hv u cmnted this on a poem on ragging
bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
COOL
Poetry.com 4.5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 145 reviews.
michael hough 14 days ago
loved reading this!
Anonymous 28 days ago
Yearning to be free, very true to so many of us .....absolutely lovely reading
Jessi Reynolds More than 1 year ago
I felt like I was staring in a mirror as I read it. You truly captured a reflection of admittance. Well done!
Humera Shafeeq More than 1 year ago
Super nice
Madison Coffin More than 1 year ago
I'm totally with you on this
ticklemuch More than 1 year ago
And U shall B Free! Keep writing!
Grace VandeWalle More than 1 year ago
Super good! Lots of description! I love how you used the words to describe exactly how you are feeling. Its realllllyyy good!
Marae Back More than 1 year ago
i love it!
Emma Shinkins More than 1 year ago
Amazing poem. It really strikes the message clearly.
Isabella Fincher More than 1 year ago
This poem perfectly describes how most teenagers feel growing up, including me. The struggle for finding yourself is a long and hard journey, especially when being yourself is different than what your peer group expects you to be. I will definitely remember this poem. Keep writing!
Christopher Hickman More than 1 year ago
I really get a sense of the fear and inner pain, It makes you want to reach out and give a hug and say, don't worry we're all afraid deep inside.
Rochelle Meyer More than 1 year ago
Enjoyed it and will remember it
Martin Ndereba More than 1 year ago
that's a nice piece..i wish i could read more
Emilia Wrelton More than 1 year ago
Really well written through foregrounding and marked syntax has really nice ambiguity and imagery yet suggests a clear intention and meaning. I'd really appreciate your feedback if you wouldn't mind!
Sandra Barrios More than 1 year ago
I love the whole thing! Keep up the good work :)
Annette Diforti More than 1 year ago
Very deep and powerful poem
Hugh Tague More than 1 year ago
Love your opinion on one I just wrote if you get a chance, Thank You http://poetry.com/poems/1279221-What-To-Say-A-Tribute-to-Maya-Angelou-
Brandi Amon More than 1 year ago
In my feelings. lol.
Pencil McRyan More than 1 year ago
You've really put the feeling into words.
Necy Baddass Gem More than 1 year ago
Loved it. I would appreciate feedback.
D.L J More than 1 year ago
I too, hope to find myself one day.. Until then, I remain astray.
Humera Shafeeq More than 1 year ago
Wow
B H More than 1 year ago
I really loved it, it seems so sincere and heartfelt. Would you mind reviewing my poem, i woud sppreciate your feedback : http://poetry.com/poems/1207511-Hourglass
Kojo Amoako More than 1 year ago
cool.....your review on my poem, will be very much appreciated http://poetry.com/poems/1206086-The-Dreamer thanks
Jessica Sikora More than 1 year ago
Heartfelt, nicely done
Sameer Shrestha More than 1 year ago
So much pain.. Very good job
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