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Who Do You See

The me that you dont know,
she is the feelings that i dont show.
Consealed destruction in my mind,
immortality I search to find.
Everyones words eating at my soul,
parts of my sainity locked in a hole.
Secrets and words you can not hear,
they are far beneath the drugs and beer.
I look in the mirror this is what I see,
a terrified soul yearning to be free.
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bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
I LIKED IT
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
I wrote this poem as a teen,(many many years ago) No I was not a drug addict. I was a teenager whom as many could not show my true self for fear of ridicule.
bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
I LIKED IT
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
the day you learn that being yourself is ok is day your free
Chhavi Jalori More than 1 year ago
wht 4 hv u cmnted this on a poem on ragging
bobby johnsom More than 1 year ago
COOL
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ticklemuch 7 months ago
And U shall B Free! Keep writing!
Grace VandeWalle 9 months ago
Super good! Lots of description! I love how you used the words to describe exactly how you are feeling. Its realllllyyy good!
Marae Back 10 months ago
i love it!
Emma Shinkins 10 months ago
Amazing poem. It really strikes the message clearly.
Isabella Fincher 11 months ago
This poem perfectly describes how most teenagers feel growing up, including me. The struggle for finding yourself is a long and hard journey, especially when being yourself is different than what your peer group expects you to be. I will definitely remember this poem. Keep writing!
Christopher Hickman 11 months ago
I really get a sense of the fear and inner pain, It makes you want to reach out and give a hug and say, don't worry we're all afraid deep inside.
Rochelle Meyer 11 months ago
Enjoyed it and will remember it
Martin Ndereba More than 1 year ago
that's a nice piece..i wish i could read more
Emilia Wrelton More than 1 year ago
Really well written through foregrounding and marked syntax has really nice ambiguity and imagery yet suggests a clear intention and meaning. I'd really appreciate your feedback if you wouldn't mind!
Sandra Barrios More than 1 year ago
I love the whole thing! Keep up the good work :)
Annette Diforti More than 1 year ago
Very deep and powerful poem
Hugh Tague More than 1 year ago
Love your opinion on one I just wrote if you get a chance, Thank You http://poetry.com/poems/1279221-What-To-Say-A-Tribute-to-Maya-Angelou-
Brandi Amon More than 1 year ago
In my feelings. lol.
Pencil McRyan More than 1 year ago
You've really put the feeling into words.
Necy Baddass Gem More than 1 year ago
Loved it. I would appreciate feedback.
D.L J More than 1 year ago
I too, hope to find myself one day.. Until then, I remain astray.
B H More than 1 year ago
I really loved it, it seems so sincere and heartfelt. Would you mind reviewing my poem, i woud sppreciate your feedback : http://poetry.com/poems/1207511-Hourglass
Kojo Amoako More than 1 year ago
cool.....your review on my poem, will be very much appreciated http://poetry.com/poems/1206086-The-Dreamer thanks
Jessica Sikora More than 1 year ago
Heartfelt, nicely done
Sameer Shrestha More than 1 year ago
So much pain.. Very good job
Light S More than 1 year ago
Cool
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
ty
carl tindle More than 1 year ago
i love this! so meaningful. would you mind reading some of my poems?
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
will do. thanks for the review!
Hoss Orlando More than 1 year ago
In ways it hits me deep
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
Glad it was able to touch you.
Jolie Gerding More than 1 year ago
Gets right to the core of the inner feelings that so many of us have felt. Great work!
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
thanks
Savannah Holyfield More than 1 year ago
I truthfully admire your work! I would love it if you took the time to look over a poem of mine and shared your thoughts about it! I've just recently began writing on a regular basis. So check out my page!:)
samantha sage More than 1 year ago
Will do Savannah, thanks for your kind words.
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