Kaede's Brief Redemption (Inspired by the anime 'Elfen Lied')
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She escapes to the woods
Where she meets a kind boy who
Holds a box of song.
Where she meets a kind boy who
Holds a box of song.
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Poetry.com 2.7 out of 5 based on 3 votes.
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Short, and pretty.
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And what happens? This is just an intro. If it was to continue it may become of interest. It has potential to go somewhere. What happens when she meets the boy with the box of song? What kind of song is it and what kind of mood is being presented? This is definitely incomplete.
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I felt like I was left hanging
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