A Summers' Tale
a vast open space filled with an ocean of warmth
the song of birds swimming in sky
a concherto of strings soothe a wandering mind
on a hillside she sleeps next to me
cool breeze floats upon unrepentant skin
submerged in a bed of green
natures scent rolls over spirit still
she sleeps on a hillside next to me
caressed by summers endless touch
fingers entwined beneath the blue
forever to dance in depths of dream
next to me on a hillside she sleeps still
the song of birds swimming in sky
a concherto of strings soothe a wandering mind
on a hillside she sleeps next to me
cool breeze floats upon unrepentant skin
submerged in a bed of green
natures scent rolls over spirit still
she sleeps on a hillside next to me
caressed by summers endless touch
fingers entwined beneath the blue
forever to dance in depths of dream
next to me on a hillside she sleeps still
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Poetry.com 3.5 out of 5 based on 2 votes.
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I love the flow of this poem. Well written.
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TOO MUCH REPETITION LAST LINE---KEEP WRITING!
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