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Lost at Sea

   Lost At Sea
 
Since losing my pilot
To a far off shore
I’m like a sailing ship at sea,
Depending on the wind
To carry me
To distant lands
And unexplored shores.
If the winds do not prevail
There is nothing
To fill my sail
 The oceans tides
Will guide my ride
Without my pilot
Beside my side.
Not an optional way,
You will agree,
To be tossed about
By an angry sea.
I’m at the mercy of the tide.
This will be a bumpy ride.
 Sending me anywhere it wills.
God will be my guiding light
To release me from
This unusual plight
 Leading me to my pilot’s site.
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Poetry.com 4 out of 5 based on 11 votes.
PinocchioPoet More than 1 year ago
I like the story line, very well written!
Joshua Colbert More than 1 year ago
Incredible!....
Ismail Wikimedia More than 1 year ago
perfect
Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi More than 1 year ago
keep writing and sharing more
Erin OB More than 1 year ago
It's nice to be inspired.
Kunal Anand More than 1 year ago
quite adeptly explained and captured the essence
Jeanette Cook More than 1 year ago
I love poems about the sea! This is nice to read!
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice one
James Olson More than 1 year ago
Well written.
Mahashweta Majumder Dey More than 1 year ago
fine
Thomas More than 1 year ago
Thank you Ms. Dey
ENGLISH VAN ESSEN More than 1 year ago
Lacking in direction, structure and original expression.
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