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FINAL SCRIPT

Come down  from the stage
foot- lights fade
back to the  green-room--
return
all  make-ups and wig or pads
mask or color- strips
cast aside,and wash off-- clean.

If  further can 
come back in naked faith
to the stage
where
 tired vistors  are moving out.
And 
take your final stand 
speak it loud ----
' I am   now  here  and
beyond those scripted words--
I repeat
 I am.now,  the real  one  -
before you !'
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Poetry.com 3.3 out of 5 based on 3 votes.
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
great structure done here
Dolly S. J. Piper More than 1 year ago
I would've given 41/2 stars if it were possible, because... It's a Yahtzee roll as far as structure, so the syncopation is way off. However, the concept is very good... thoughts are complete & well conveyed, With a bit of research on what makes a poem, a poem & a rewrite you'll have a winner here.
Timothy Bohrer More than 1 year ago
I liked a lot of things about it as the words were great but I don't think that the spacing and structure was thought out that well. i think that you could of done a little better but Overall its okay.
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