Feast - Haiku
by
Asim Nehal
Clever fox follwed
the footsteps of a lion
extensive meal found
the footsteps of a lion
extensive meal found
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Poetry.com 4.7 out of 5 based on 36 votes.
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Its really amazing, Asim! Good Job!
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Well done Asim...
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Or is it done intentionally?
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Loving the political implications haha...great haiku.
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Well written poem
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Love it.
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So meany meanings can come from this - which is why it's so good! Like an Aesop's Fable
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with meaning
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reflection of political life.
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Great haiku. Factual and meaningful. Well executed
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In few words a whole novel is described. Love it.
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IT MIGHT BE DANGEROUS
ONE SHOULD HAVE ONE'S OWN WAY.
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Haiku's seem easy to most.. simple format, difficult to execute properly. you've done it here :] very nice
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Nice one
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Interesting and good to read.
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I appreciate your reviews.
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There is always a simpler way to accomplish arduous tasks.
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i love this well done my friend great haiku
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i like it and it tells a short stroy
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Well written, clever and creative.
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Oh, I LOVE a good Haiku! This is just darling, quite expressive and the fox is made so endearing.
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love it
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very nice written
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You have a way with words; excellent haiku. I write them myself; check them out when you have time.
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The lion leads them to the promised land. Good
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