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Do We Really Need A Motor Car ?

Where would we be without
the motor car ?
Everyone has one,
to get about
and travel
afar.
 

Before the days of the
motor car being
invented,
transport was by horse,
bicycle, 
or foot.
Slow and far from ideal,
but people had no choice,
knew no different,
until the advent,
of an automobile.
 

They were crude affairs at first,
that only the rich could afford.
They were not particularly
fast,
being uncomfortable, draughty,
cold.
Steel and iron work unforgiving,
shaking your bones,
feeling every bump
and with a firm grip taking hold.
 

Unreliable and breaking down,
overheating, misfiring,
spitting and banging.
Engines having to be started
by cranking with a handle,
that wouldn't start first time
and arms aching, 
it was tiring.
 

Of course, I refer to the first motor
cars that were made,
but then the industry,
expanded with blue prints
of models 
and plans that were patented 
and laid.
 

Now, it would appear, everyone has a
motor car or an automobile.
The modern person apparently
can't do without. 
Nonsense, to get a bus, train or tram 
or even walk.
Won't hear of it and dismisses
that type of talk.
 

There are now so many motor cars,
clogging the highways and the byeways,
Nobody is going anywhere very fast or 
at any great speed,
you may as well have walked in the first place,
got a bus or by bicycle, go.
If only a short distance,
I can't see the problem, indeed.
 

It is a fact. that we have become all
too reliant,
on our motor car,
but the powers that be, are
clamping down 
on our trip,
into town
and an expensive jaunt,
it proves to be.
They are keeping the pressure on,
to remain defiant. 
 
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Victor Gatenby More than 1 year ago
The poem ' Do We Really Need A Motor Car ?' is a philosophical viewpoint of where we were in a bygone era to where we are now and change that has come about in a modern global society. It is fact that we are being made to pay for that change and to look at different ways that we go about our everyday lives, for the greater and common good of all. V J Gatenby (Author)
Poetry.com 4 out of 5 based on 3 votes.
Don Olson More than 1 year ago
OUTTASIGHT! (old 60's term) This is so well thought out and such a fun read and a subject I have never pondered. Well done.
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
The poems traces the line of the discovery of different means of transport and the general metamorphosis of transportation from the foot to horses and then the motor engines. Well thought out.
Victor Gatenby More than 1 year ago
Tochukwu, I appreciate your views and comments. Many thanks.
tulugak1935 More than 1 year ago
Is it poetry?
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