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" Soaring "

Soaring high above the earthly plain
Above the clouds that now lay as pillows
Nothing can touch me but the mere wind
That blows across my face feeling like a gentle touch
It seems as if  I have found my paradise
I can see the world in a mere second
Such a wonderful event

I surely hope this feeling never ends
As  I rest my head on my tranquil thoughts
It is so quiet
No restlessness anymore
Feeling so light and free
Soaring like the eagle in flight
Gracefully floating with no cares or worries

Darkness soon turns to daybreak
The beams of light strike my face with great warmth
A new day to be free
A new day just to be me
Putting my life above all worries
Beep......beep.....beep
It was all a dream
And I awake to the real world refreshed
Ready for all she will bring                   
    
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Poetry.com 4 out of 5 based on 4 votes.
Oscar Ibarra More than 1 year ago
well done
Shelly Faber More than 1 year ago
I like the visuals here, especially "As I rest my head on my tranquil thoughts"
Kristan Shepherd More than 1 year ago
great ending good structure
Segun Ajayi More than 1 year ago
Thanks for your sense of appreciation.
Anjam Abbas 9 months ago
nice
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